Sunday, February 26, 2012

Paint the Image

Day #27 - 2012 Haiku Challenge
Theme: Paint the Image
Form: Haiku





 Open sesame
Star of David on the gate
Barren and empty


Questions asked later
Symbol of the Holacaust?
Gated forever


Star of unity
Rendered on an open gate
Truths may rest beyond







9 comments:

  1. Ellecee ... this series of haiku leaves me in awe. You have really painted the image with your words and composed a wonderful haiku. I especially like the third one:

    Star of unity
    Rendered on an open gate
    Truths may rest beyond


    This is such a wise remark. Thank you for sharing and letting us be part of your inspiration and joy of sharing.

    Namaste

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  2. "Truths may rest beyond"

    I sense hope in these words!

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  3. I loved the Last one,most powerful and optimistic.

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  4. Beautiful set...But, I loved the last haiku bit more......Very powerful....Thanks for sharing :)


    Open gate of your heart

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  5. Beautiful set...I like all of them ~

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  6. Truths may rest beyond

    Powerful and optimistic truth be told. Thank you for sharing your perspective. Here is my Day 27.

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  7. Truths may rest beyond, indeed. Well done.
    http://wp.me/p1ZKiY-wm

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