Wednesday, March 28, 2012

3 Word Wednesday







As I jostle you
I catch your cool fragrant scent
Remnant to cherish



I jostle with love
and only remnants remain
Fragrant dried roses


"ellecee"

10 comments:

  1. Great haiku pair! Love can leave many memories!

    Hank

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  2. fragrant dried roses. yes that's a memory some of us have of past love.Beautifully put.

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  3. A delight to read these lovely haiku..beautiful weaved..

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  4. This is like pot pourri..the jostles of everyday life that people experience..and yet the smell of roses makes it a personal treasure..snuggle up..Jae

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  5. That first poem is provocative and evocative. Nice work.

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  6. I enjoy the victorian romance feel of this poem, Elle.

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  7. Both of these convey memories, nicely done!

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  8. The second haiku describes places I've been on planet love...

    Nicely done!

    My 3WW

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  9. Wonderfully crafted haiku duo. Loved reading this one. Thank you for sharing.

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