Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Three Word Wednesday





I am far away
from you
 who move me
motivate me
I beat you to
the punch
(pardon the pun)
for now
in this moment
I feel
no pressure
no substance
no pain



"ellecee"



5 comments:

  1. this one has me thinking...not sure I like where my thoughts have gone, but I do like this peace (pun intended).

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  2. It's nice to get a quiet moment in that empty space, but one can't stay there forever, and perhaps we wouldn't want to.

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  3. In some circumstances it is good to be far away..and no pain is very important..powerful write..Jae

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  4. lovely, the push and the emotional pull of love.

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  5. Thank you all for your thoughtful comments. I appreciate them all.

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