"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
I like what you wrote, "Not all joy last, be prepared." so honest.
It does take courage to be "we". So well said.
It is true, "not all joy lasts." But if we are lucky, it is replaced by a greater joy.
As yes courage and reality, strong themes in your poem , nice response .LCMuch love...
Love this!💜 We musn't let those dreams slip out of our reach!💜
I thought of courage, too, when I heard this song and watched the video. Love and unity do take courage. Very nice!
That's a very lovely poem! And could apply to every couple – though we know, for the couple depicted in the video, an extra layer of courage was required.
Good on the ingredients. L.C. Keep on living to your dreams. ..
love the last stanza.
Lovely! The last lines nailed this ... having the courage...to be "we'
Yes, yes! I adore this. Be prepared, work on it, keep it healthy, all of that. Wonderful!
As twilight moves away and darkness engulfs me with its solemn breath you come to me and we open ourselves to one another ou...
I like what you wrote, "Not all joy last, be prepared." so honest.
ReplyDeleteIt does take courage to be "we". So well said.
ReplyDeleteIt is true, "not all joy lasts." But if we are lucky, it is replaced by a greater joy.
ReplyDeleteAs yes courage and reality, strong themes in your poem , nice response .LC
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
Love this!💜 We musn't let those dreams slip out of our reach!💜
ReplyDeleteI thought of courage, too, when I heard this song and watched the video. Love and unity do take courage. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThat's a very lovely poem! And could apply to every couple – though we know, for the couple depicted in the video, an extra layer of courage was required.
ReplyDeleteGood on the ingredients. L.C. Keep on living to your dreams.
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love the last stanza.
ReplyDeleteLovely! The last lines nailed this ... having the courage...to be "we'
ReplyDeleteYes, yes! I adore this. Be prepared, work on it, keep it healthy, all of that. Wonderful!
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